Heartbreak in the rain

It's raining now.

Pitter patter pitter patter 
I had to look for shelter. 

Pitter patter pitter patter 

But I faltered and fell in the gutter. 

I caught my breath.

Pitter patter pitter patter
Something shattered.
Pitter patter pitter patter 
Ah, I gave my heart away on a platter.
Pitter patter pitter patter 
Just once, did I even matter?

This is getting quite enjoyable.
I'm still pretty inexperienced at this, but I was trying to give the scene where she had just confessed to a guy she liked, and... he pretty much didn't have a response.